I see a vision
of … an uninspired author:
CONSTANCE RUTHERFORD, Double Entry (1939)
But why must Isabeau come sneaking into her memory, filling it
with poisonous thoughts? For a moment, caught between two times, she had hated Piers,
hated him as a tyrant who compelled her to do his will. How silly! She mustn't
let Isabeau do things like that, mustn't get confused between her own memories
and those others.
I
flagged Double Entry as of possible
interest a few years ago when I first added Constance Rutherford to my master
list a few years ago. I was intrigued by Rutherford's apparent versatility,
which included, out of a total of six novels, a historical novel set during the
Hundred Years War, a mystery that received at least some acclaim, a
psychological spy story, and Double Entry,
about a young wife whose archaeologist husband moves them to a medieval French
chateau, where she discovers she can see into the chateau's violent and
turbulent past.
Intriguing
premise, no? Well, indeed, but sadly, the premise was just about the only
satisfying element of this novel.
Piers
Mordaunt has purchased the chateau in order to research its history, along with
the Abbé of St Pierre-le-Pont nearby, who is also interested in archaeology and
helps Piers with his work. Veronica is Piers' young wife, who soon begins
seeing visions of the chateau's glory days. She doesn't exactly travel in time,
as she has no interaction with the figures of the past. Instead, she merely
experiences the emotions and sensations of people from those earlier days. In
the case of her chateau flashbacks, these are almost always those of the Lady
Isabeau, a former occupant of the chateau with no redeeming values whatsoever
apart from her looks.
As
Isabeau's life seems to have consisted primarily of battles, betrayals, forced
marriage, a dead child, murder, and illicit romance (none of which we learn
about in sufficient depth to make it of more than passing interest), it's
hardly surprising that Veronica finds her forays into the past exhausting. It was
quite tiring to read about, and I confess to having skimmed some bits of it. But
Piers sees her gift as a godsend, and pressures her to continue handling
various historic items in order to learn more about their history, culminating
in a harrowing visit to the chateau's newly-excavated dungeons. The kindly Abbé
issues repeated warnings about the dangers of such dabbling, but of course the
warnings aren't heeded or else there would have been no story at all.
In
addition to the concern that Veronica's visions—during which she experiences
the very dark emotions and motives of Isabeau—might permanently discombobulate
her own mind (such as it is), there's the additional complication that her gift is double-edged.
When Piers attempts to check the accuracy of her visions by giving her items
from his own childhood and home life, an old pencil of his gives her an
unexpected glimpse of the kind of person he is beneath the surface. A visit
from his alienated sister, Marian, and her friend Mr Hemmersley (who tends to pontificate
endlessly about Veronica's gift and the nature of time—I skimmed a bit of that
as well), provides further revelations. In the meantime, Gustave Marchand, an
English-speaking woodsman working to deforest France, has rescued her dog and
become her ideal of a perfect man, which perhaps muddles some of her visions of
Isabeau's love life with her own wishful thinking.
Are
you getting the idea that this isn't a favorite novel?
Honestly,
I did find the clairvoyance plot interesting at first, and the chateau setting
is intriguing too. But Veronica's visions were pure romance novel dreck, and
the present day plot isn't much more sophisticated. We learn nothing of much
substance about Veronica's past or her family, nor of what has made her into
such a wet dishmop of a young woman. This depthlessness and anchorlessness at
least helps subtract a tiny bit from the implausibility of her losing her own
identity so easily (if you don't have much identity to begin with, it's surely
easier to lose track of it), but it also subtracts from the reader's ability to
care much about her. And whether you can feel that the novel's ending is a
happy one or not will depend on your point of view, it's certainly silly and unbelievable,
and it leaves Veronica just as wet and dim-witted as ever.
Schoolgirls
grow up (but not in this novel):
JOAN COGGIN, And Why Not Knowing (1929)
'I am sorry—it's frightfully rude, I know, but you were
looking so intense and then the ink pouring all over you! There is some on your
face, too.'
Penelope gurgled, 'Just as I was meditating.'
'What were you meditating about?'
'I don't know. I was just sitting biting my pen and
meditating; I felt that that was what an author would do.'
On
the bright side, And Why Not Knowing is
not as bad as Double Entry. It's
considerably better written and it has some amusing high points. And if you've
ever wondered what a girls' school story would be like if it followed its perky
gung-ho protagonists into their adult romantic lives, this could be just the
book for you. Though the risk is that it might also be the book that efficiently
and permanently removes your yearning for such a story.
I
first wrote about Joan Coggin back in 2014 after reading the first of her mystery
novels, Who Killed the Curate? (1944),
featuring the loopy Lady Lupin as detective. That book was zany, frivolous,
entertaining fun. Fifteen years earlier, in 1929, Coggin published her first
book, and her only non-mystery novel for adults (she later published three more
mysteries and six girls' school stories under the pseudonym Joanna Lloyd).
And Why Not Knowing (the title, poetic
language for "and not knowing why," comes from the Rubaiyat—see here, Stanza XXIX, for
the full quote) follows the early adult years of three young women—Penelope
Talbot, Ann Graham, and Nora Conway—who are just finishing school as the novel
opens. The three are intricately interrelated and it took some considerable
time for me to sort it all out: It seems that Penelope's mother married young
to a man who already had two grown children, Dick and Jean. Ann and her brother
John are Jean's children, which makes them half-somethings to Penelope but no blood relation. Nora is an orphaned
niece of Mrs Trevellion's, and Penelope's mother's second marriage was to Mr
Trevellion, who already had a 10-year-old son Donald. John and Donald also
appear now and again for some perky dialogue, as well as other young men.
Among
those young men is Giles Roscoe, who marries the pretty Nora despite having
more rapport with Penelope, who has always secretly loved him, thus tidily setting
up the melodrama portion of the novel. As time passes, Nora—who is utterly
self-absorbed but whom everyone in the book inexplicably adores and defends—becomes
more unstable and reckless. She abandons Giles, who seeks comfort in Penelope, thus
arousing her emotions and hopes, only to have Nora return and stake her claim
again. Etc. Etc. The plotlines around Nora (appropriately nicknamed "Princess")
are simply asinine, and by the end of the novel the three initially-likeable main
characters had irrevocably become for me, in shorthand, the Bitch, the Doormat,
and the Enabler, and I wouldn't have got my clothes wet rescuing any of them
from a flood.
Ahem.
The
last portion of the novel is weakened by some trite and shallow spiritualizing,
which is only topped off by a delightful passage in which Penelope describes
how absolutely repulsed she is by Jews. Always lovely to see in the protagonist
of a novel, especially one so clearly autobiographical!
It's
hard to see what exactly the target audience for this novel was. Actual
schoolgirls might have enjoyed the lighter, sillier passages, but the gushy
romance would likely have irritated them. But more mature young women would surely
have been either annoyed by the frivolous tone, if they were sophisticated, or,
if they were the stereotypical Boots Library patronizing shopgirls looking for
a romantic melodrama, they would have found the intellectual banter an
irritating disruption to the gushiness. Either way, I'd like to think they
would have found the main characters difficult to like.